Hi Bethany, a solid piece of work, but what I would say is that you need to be careful you don't fall into 'informal' language at times. A good essay with key theories discussed correctly and in detail. B - WELL DONE.
Hi Bethany, a solid piece of work, but what I would say is that you need to be careful you don't fall into 'informal' language at times. A good essay with key theories discussed correctly and in detail. B - WELL DONE.
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